There is some fucking need in the
"You sit up, blood streams from an open hole in your forehead, filling your mouth, its warm bitterness makes you vomit in your throat."
More seriously, this is obviously not at all, but i'm pretty sure that you can make even better, because of the UI (user interface) itself that's actually not bad (with the return system)
Keep it run and maybe one day you'll be a fucking star, cheers.